# Product Email Notes

Voice profile:
- direct launch-note style
- wants what changed, who it helps, and what is still rough
- prefers nearby evidence and avoids market-level certainty

AI-pattern diagnosis:
- chatbot residue: "Great question!"
- inflated language: "groundbreaking", "pivotal solution"
- vague landscape phrase: "modern AI landscape"
- superficial participle: "showcasing"
- negative parallelism: "not just... but..."
- unsupported broad promise: "future of work"

Fact decisions:
- local voice profile, cleaner rewrite, claim review: supported by evidence
- Markdown report export: supported by evidence
- "cut editing time in half for every team": unsupported, removed
- pilot users said editorial handoff was easier: supported by evidence, kept with narrow wording

Rewrite decision:
- Kept the launch-note shape from the sample.
- Rewrote the marketing sentence as concrete product behavior.
- Did not add a benchmark or market claim.
